You see, I'm not a natural leader and I've never been comfortable in front of a crowd, and I'm certainly not one to step up and take control in such situations...which is why this is all so strange to me. Part of my high comfort level is no doubt tied to the fact that I'm familiar with this group of people, and they've all been extremely supportive in my new leadership role. To be honest, if I were challenged I might crumble into a nervous pile on the floor, but luckily I've got people who I consider natural leaders backing me up. So this is good for me, this step away from that which is typical, this new challenge. But I digress.
With some gentle prompting, I've decided to share my first chapter here. Usually I'm against censorship, but I do feel the need to censor some of the language since I've got nieces and nephews and this is so very public. (Plus, I still choose to live under the delusion that my parents aren't aware that I know such language. Make fun if you must, but I'll always be part-Good Girl.)
Please keep in mind that this is still in draft form and will hopefully improve in the revision process. I'm interested in what your thoughts are after reading it. Would you want to read on?
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CHAPTER ONE: GONE
It wasn’t the impact
reverberating up my arms that broke through the rage roaring in my ears, but
the wet crack that sounded out beyond the skin and muscle that wrapped around
his torso. When he fell to the floor at my feet there was another snap behind
the thump, and before I could take my next ragged breath I found my sneakered
foot embedded in his ribs. He wasn’t crying, but growling at me through the
pain, and that was when I realized I was the one standing above him this time,
his bat hanging by my side like an extra limb. I watched him curling in on
himself, cursing me between gasps from what I hoped was a punctured lung.
“What’s that, Daniel?” It was
the first time I’d spoken since my brother walked in the front door and met his
own bat across the ribs. I knew it wasn’t smart to kneel closer to hear him; he
had twenty years of testosterone and muscle on his side. Instead I popped the
top of his bent knees with the bat and asked again.
“You’re ******* dead!” he
screamed clearly this time, and I smiled because he didn’t know.
When he moved as if to get
up, I widened my stance over him and took a hard swing, the bat smashing into
his left arm. He let out a primitive wail and after another hit, didn’t try to
get up again.
I thought about our father’s
eyes watching me incapacitated from his bed a couple of hours earlier, and the
feeling it brought bloomed in my chest warm and calm. Something happened that
changed me. Keeping my eyes on my writhing brother, still gasping from the
living room floor, I crossed the room and sat in our father’s chair, the
well-worn, brown leather recliner that reigned over our house.
“No, you see I’m not the one
who’s dead,” I argued gently, the roar having died down in my ears and my pulse
easing back.
Daniel managed to lift his
head enough to turn toward me, the hate in his eyes making room for a hint of
fear. “What the **** are you talking about?”
I
smiled again; I looked forward to telling him.
Earlier that evening, I’d
walked into my father’s room with his dinner, meatloaf and mashed potatoes,
having no idea this was the last meal I’d cook for him. When he found out the
cancer spread from his lung to his lymphatic system, the prognosis looked grim
enough for him to refuse further treatment. My father told people he wanted to
die in comfort, but in the back of my mind I believed he was punishing me for
his illness. After all, regardless of how quickly his health declined, it was I
who acted as his nurse for the last couple of months, feeding and bathing him,
helping him to the toilet chair beside the bed and cleaning it after each use.
When he first got sick, I was terrified of him dying because I was scared of
being left alone. I once believed that a house full of angry hands was better
than an empty one. By the time I served his last plate of meatloaf, however, I
was warming up to the idea.
Since my mom took off for
good I struggled with the fear of being abandoned by everyone I knew. Granted,
it wasn’t much different after she left since she was hardly around anyway, but
at least I knew I had a mother somewhere. The day she left was so anticlimactic
it seemed both inevitable and unbelievable, like we were nothing but a passing
mistake in her life, easy baggage to cast off.
I was sixteen and had passed
my Driver’s Ed class, which I practiced telling her all the way home on the
bus. I didn’t worry when she wasn’t home, though it dampened my excitement some
knowing the next time I saw her she’d probably either be too high or too
exhausted to care about my news. I watched TV for a while and then started
dinner as usual. When my father got home from work he was more irritable than
normal but I knew better than to mention it. We sat around the table, me, Dad,
and Daniel and nobody asked where Mom was.
“How’d
baseball go today?” our father asked.
“Sucked. O’Riley don’t know ****. He’s putting Jackson in to start on Saturday,” Daniel grumbled through
his mouthful of spaghetti. “Dumbass.”
Daniel was a senior that year
and pitched on our high school baseball team.
“If you practiced more, maybe
he’d put you in,” our father replied, ripping a bite from his garlic bread
without moving his critical gaze from my brother, who I knew felt it.
“I passed my final Driver’s
Ed exam today,” I volunteered. I’d been holding my breath.
My father and Daniel both
looked at me for four seconds exactly, and then continued eating without
comment. Even though I was used to this, my heart still fell.
“I’ve been saving up
babysitting money for a used car so I don’t have to ride the bus to school
anymore,” I added. “And also so when I get a real job-“
“Nothing
wrong with the bus, Sarah,” said my father.
“I
know, I was just-“
“I know what you were just, but I’m telling you not to go
letting yourself believe you’re better than anybody else just because you know
the difference between the gas pedal and the brakes.” He took another bite of
spaghetti, his eyes drilling into mine to hold me in place. “Next thing I know,
you’ll be parading yourself around like your ***** of a mother, and I don’t
need another good-for-nothing woman to deal with.”
I bit my lower lip to keep
from speaking because I didn’t know what I hated more, that he called my mother
a ***** or that he thought I’d wind up just as strung out and weak as she was.
“You got something to say?”
Daniel piped up, a satisfied smile stretched across his greasy face. He’d
always thought he was something special being the son.
I
shook my head.
“Do you?” our father asked,
his hand wrapping around the handle of his fork on the table, a gesture I knew
well.
“No,
sir,” was all I could say.
“Speaking of your mother, she
won’t be coming home this time.” He said it so casually, so carelessly as if
he’d just told us it’d be raining on Saturday.
“Whatever,”
Daniel spat. “Who the hell cares.”
“Where
is she?” I asked, forgetting myself.
I knew the instant the words
escaped my mouth that I should’ve kept quiet. His eyes flared and his fist
clenched. When he spoke, the word came clearly and slowly. “Gone.”
My knees trembled under the
table, my hands suddenly freezing. It would just be me now taking the blows. At
least with my mom around from time to time there was someone to share them
with. As much as I hated her for not taking me and running, I still needed her
around. I focused on breathing and held back the tears for fear of further
ridicule.
“She finally up and left us
altogether, stupid *****, and you should be grateful. You might have a chance
of becoming useful now.” I could smell his garlic breath and thought I might
throw up right into my plate.
We finished eating in silence
and after I was done washing up, I threw up in the dishwater instead. We didn’t
talk about her again after that. I knew I no longer had a mother after that,
too. Happy Sweet Sixteen. She chose to leave us; it would’ve been easier to
take if she’d died.
As I stood beside my father’s
bed watching him pick at the dinner I cooked for him, images of my mother’s
swollen and bruised face flashed through my mind. It’d been two years since she
left and I’d taken on her share of things as was expected, but seeing my father
in such a weakened state began to give rise to something new within me. It
began with a flutter in my stomach that slowly reached into my chest. Foreign
at first, I slowly realized this feeling must be hope.
“Where’s
Daniel?” he asked, his voice gruff and impatient.
“Work,”
I answered simply.
His sigh rushed out in more
of a huff, and he stuck his finger into the blob of mashed potatoes.
“God******, they’ve gone cold.” His weakening body did nothing to soften his temperament.
I
started to reply, but the back of his hand knocked the words right out of my
mouth.
“I don’t want to hear it you
dumb ****. Is it too much to ask for hot food? Don’t I deserve a decent meal
for taking care of you all your damn life?” Despite his complaints, he kept
eating.
I pressed my fingers to the
side of my mouth, tonguing the inside part that was now bleeding, while my
father grumbled and cursed his way through his dinner. I was expected to wait
so I could take the tray away the second he was done. Patience wasn’t something
he practiced.
“What
the hell are you staring at?” he asked, his fork poised in front of his mouth.
I
hadn’t realized I was looking at him. “I’m not staring,” I replied.
“Don’t you argue with me,” he
began, but stopped suddenly when a sharp breath in stuck in his throat. His
eyes popped wide and his hands went frantic grabbing at his bed sheets,
knocking over his iced tea, then tugging at the front of his shirt, ripping at
his collar. It wasn’t until he grabbed his own throat that I understood what
was happening.
At first I jumped back,
startled by the burst of movement, but as I listened to the sound of air trying
to fight its way around the clog in his throat, my mind began to buzz. It’d be
so easy to let this happen; I was in the kitchen washing up and didn’t hear
him. It was an accident. Though my thoughts sped through my head, I moved
slowly and with purpose, first taking the tray from his lap and placing it on
the floor. He was balking against his own body when I climbed onto the bed,
straddling him and watching the panic take hold of his weathered face.
“Shhh,” I soothed, taking his
hands and pushing them palm down at his sides. “It’s going to be okay.” I
scooted up his body and pressed my knees into the backs of his hands.
I’d just turned eighteen and
graduation was only a couple months away. With him gone I could walk away from
this place if I wanted and no one could stop me. I could achieve what my mother
was too weak to: freedom.
He watched me with wild eyes,
still trying to force the mashed potatoes from his windpipe, but didn’t
struggle against me until I leaned forward into his face, resting my weight on
both arms that were now resting hard against his. Inches from my father’s face,
I watched him fight to breathe and it thrilled me. All he could do was kick his
legs beneath my weight and try to squirm out from under me, but it was all
wasted effort. The cancer had greatly weakened his body, but not his mind, and
he knew exactly what was happening. My veins coursed with adrenaline while his
depleted of oxygen, and when he finally stilled, I felt something else I’d
never felt before.
Power.
After I replaced the food
tray to his lap and repositioned his arms, there was no question what had to
happen next. Daniel would be home from practice soon. My mind flooded with
memories of all the pain inflicted on me at the hands of my big brother, the
one who was supposed to protect me instead of joining in. The rising feeling of
hope stirred deep within me and started to spin into a hot wind that grew with
each passing minute, fueled by the anger I carried, my own kind of cancer. The
longer I waited with Daniel’s wooden bat across my lap in the dark of the
living room, the stronger that wind grew, spinning up through my body and into
my head, until my rage was a hurricane screaming in my ears behind the thumping
of my heart.
And
now here he was, glaring up at me in pieces on the floor.
“I
said, what the **** are you talking about?” His voice cracked. I wondered if
he’d figured it out.
I
leaned forward in our father’s chair and tilted my head at Daniel as I said the
word, “Gone,” soft and sweet like I was speaking to a child.
Daniel started screaming in
rage or sadness, I didn’t know which, and I stood and raised the bat again. He
was too loud.
“No!
Please!” he yelped when he saw me.
“Shut your mouth, Daniel, or
this bat’s going to get very bloody.” I had no idea where this calmness came
from. All I knew was that this was over; I was done.
“What did you do?” he asked,
his voice strained. He was sobbing like a pathetic little baby; he sounded like
our mother.
“It’s
over, Daniel, do you understand? Do you understand what I’m saying?” My hatred
made me strong for the first time.
He
shook his head, but I didn’t know if it was at me or the terror of the
situation.
Suddenly I was on him,
sitting on his chest, my right knee crushing the broken arm at his side. He
cried out but stopped and stared up at me, waiting. With the bat shoved
crossways deep into his throat, I leaned in to say what I’d never had the
courage to say before.
“Never ******* touch me again.”
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